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Diana Shah ✦'s avatar

I love how you turned the rain into something so intimate and alive. Beautifully written 🤍

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I think this was a very sweet poem because to me it shows the majesty of two souls loving each other and themselves. It teaches one to be thoughtful and caring for their partner, while also generous and confident enough to express what they want and need. It could make for the spark of an engaging longer story. Well done and very well collaborated. Thank-you for sharing your substantial talents.

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