I think this was a very sweet poem because to me it shows the majesty of two souls loving each other and themselves. It teaches one to be thoughtful and caring for their partner, while also generous and confident enough to express what they want and need. It could make for the spark of an engaging longer story. Well done and very well collaborated. Thank-you for sharing your substantial talents.
Well you pretty much nailed it my friend as it was intended for another whom I care about very much but it was also intended to be about freedom and living life is a free and unconditional way 🤗😃
What stayed with me most was the rain. It never felt like a backdrop—it became the quiet language of the whole encounter. The alternating voices gave the piece a beautiful sense of movement, as if two perspectives were breathing through the same moment.
Charlotte, Vianne, what a beautiful collaboration! I loved how the natural scenery, the urban landscape, and your emotions blended together so effortlessly. It felt incredibly peaceful and immersive to read. 😇
I love how you turned the rain into something so intimate and alive. Beautifully written 🤍
Thank you so much Diana! A post from Vianne about rain inspired the whole thing - so it’s great it remained at the centre of the piece 💜
I think this was a very sweet poem because to me it shows the majesty of two souls loving each other and themselves. It teaches one to be thoughtful and caring for their partner, while also generous and confident enough to express what they want and need. It could make for the spark of an engaging longer story. Well done and very well collaborated. Thank-you for sharing your substantial talents.
Well you pretty much nailed it my friend as it was intended for another whom I care about very much but it was also intended to be about freedom and living life is a free and unconditional way 🤗😃
The majesty of two souls loving each other 💜💜
What a beautiful way of describing it. I loved your comment and I’m so glad you enjoyed our collaboration.
Hey Charlotte,
Thank-you very much for sharing your beautiful art and grace.
Alchemy
Thank you for this sensual little escape 💜
What stayed with me most was the rain. It never felt like a backdrop—it became the quiet language of the whole encounter. The alternating voices gave the piece a beautiful sense of movement, as if two perspectives were breathing through the same moment.
Thank you Antonio! I’m glad it came through like that to you. Writing this with Vianne had its own momentum, inspired by the rain.
Charlotte, Vianne, what a beautiful collaboration! I loved how the natural scenery, the urban landscape, and your emotions blended together so effortlessly. It felt incredibly peaceful and immersive to read. 😇
Thankyou so so much